Alright, alright — ‘like.’ Seriously though, this has great flow and a good ending. I personally think endings of poems should whipcrack, like this does.
This poem is stunning. I’m reading it in the early-ish morning while sitting at a table under the green of a tree-lined street in Charlotte ( I’ll listen soon when I have headphones). Couldn’t be a better place and time. The word choice and line breaks twist something very interesting inside me. G-d, I sound pretentious — I’m trying to say how much I love it
Alright, alright — ‘like.’ Seriously though, this has great flow and a good ending. I personally think endings of poems should whipcrack, like this does.
What can one say?
This poem is stunning. I’m reading it in the early-ish morning while sitting at a table under the green of a tree-lined street in Charlotte ( I’ll listen soon when I have headphones). Couldn’t be a better place and time. The word choice and line breaks twist something very interesting inside me. G-d, I sound pretentious — I’m trying to say how much I love it
Not pretentious at all! I’m so glad to hear you enjoyed it, and I’d say the trees are a proper accompaniment